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Title: website design help
Post by: kizz81 on July 29, 2008, 22:53:16

hello,
as part of my efforts to raise money for the air ambulance me and my dad are running a raffle for a curry for two at a local indian,
this will be presented to lots and lots of business owners in  th local area,

im really struggling on what to write on the website ive created especially for it, any help / ideas more than welcome

i have this picture that needs abit of lightening up i think....

(http://www.freewebs.com/landyrally/DSC00331.JPG)

anyone from mansfield / nottingham area that likes curry then please keep your eyes on this site, and buy a raffle ticket when the come available ...  www.landyrally.webs.com (http://www.landyrally.webs.com) <<< we thought that because its simple to remember but still related

cheers
kieran

Title: Re: website design help
Post by: Thrasher on July 30, 2008, 09:23:13

You need to proof read the text. There are a lot of basic mistakes (spelling etc) that will not endear a local business.

Title: Re: website design help
Post by: kizz81 on July 30, 2008, 10:49:10

cheers, will do, i guess that comes of working until past 2 in the morning :lol:
www.landyrally.webs.com (http://www.landyrally.webs.com)

cheers thrasher, any more advice?
 






kieran

Title: Re: website design help
Post by: Mark_Solesbury on July 30, 2008, 13:09:20

2 mins in photoshop... Slightly better.

Removed the date and time from the front also. Looks better on a website without that.

Id take one from the front for maximum promotion of the shop.

(http://hotimg23.fotki.com/a/217_37/125_116/DSC00331556.jpg)

Title: Re: website design help
Post by: carbore on July 30, 2008, 14:51:40

dont know if you could get that "Crush centre" thing removed or if its part of the hosting template.

You may find that another system has less or more appropriate adverts.

Keep at it, good luck.

Title: Re: website design help
Post by: Thrasher on July 30, 2008, 15:46:14

All you can make out on the pic is NAAZ .... you need a closer clearer shot IMHO.

Title: Re: website design help
Post by: JumboBeef on July 30, 2008, 17:05:37

Can you take another picture, and use a real camera instead of your Ericsson W580i?

Title: Re: website design help
Post by: kizz81 on July 30, 2008, 17:54:23

 :lol: right i spose i had better borrow a camrea and get one, ill get one now and post a couple to see which one is best prefered

cheers kieran

Title: Re: website design help
Post by: kizz81 on July 30, 2008, 20:20:55

im not a photographer but i think these look ok, which would you prefer? ..
1
(http://i49.servimg.com/u/f49/11/29/53/55/dscf1210.jpg)
2
(http://i49.servimg.com/u/f49/11/29/53/55/dscf1211.jpg)
3
(http://i49.servimg.com/u/f49/11/29/53/55/dscf1212.jpg)
4
(http://i49.servimg.com/u/f49/11/29/53/55/dscf1213.jpg)


cheers kieran

Title: Re: website design help
Post by: JumboBeef on July 30, 2008, 21:02:38

Two minutes in Photoshop, I hope you don't mind:

(http://www.zzmail.co.uk/images/ind.jpg)

Title: Re: website design help
Post by: kizz81 on July 30, 2008, 23:17:53

hey, i like that  :D

thanks!! il be using that one,

cheers kieran

keep and eye on www.landyrally.webs.com (http://www.landyrally.webs.com) and maybe join the auction or raffle which will start tomorrow from 7 in the morning and end on the 31st of august

Title: Re: website design help
Post by: diggerdog36 on July 31, 2008, 21:15:16

Just a few things Ive noticed,

co_operation
comapnies
Drirector of Lamdy rally ??

And not sure if lpay pay roll is correct???